RealityVictim's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Schwarzwald]

I don't mean to sound harsh...

But this really doesn't deserve to be in the top 10. But I say that because I know what you use. It's simple arpeggios and drum beats. You have ways to go.

Not a bad idea for a melody concept but experiment around, you'll find better instruments to use. Hope this helps.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/345854

Bacon92 responds:

Simplicity, especially in electronic music, is not always a bad thing.

[grooveT3K - Criminal Intent.]

Hmm...

I don't really like the drums, sounds weakish. Sounds good up till 0:42 then it gets weird. I like the claps better. Nice use of the basses besides that part and 2:05 sounds like where this song should stay at more. At 2:17, that feels a bit out of place but nice fade effect. Overall I feel like the bass could be better it feels kind of empty in a lot of parts. It's a good start though, not bad.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/418770

grooveT3K responds:

Cheers for the feedback mate!
If you have read some of the earlier post you would see that this was actually my second track ever and I have since learnt more and can certainly see room for improvement, epically the bass as it didn't really have a distinguishable bass line per say.
Thanks for the support mate!

[Mild and Good Tasting]

Could use some work.

Not bad, nice use of sampling, but i feel like the synths could be better. I love the drumbeat though, hard hitting. I feel like it needs more energy IMO. Not bad though.

RealFaction (I'm on that account, i can't review on that one though why i have this one)

EricFreeman responds:

This song's hella old so I definitely agree the synths need work. However, I don't think this song fully showcases my producing talent so feel free to listen to one of my newer tracks if you want an accurate view of what my music sounds like.

[NYAN CAT [8bit]]

Pretty good

The bassline is great, but the melody sounds too random at some points. Nice drums, and overall pretty good, just a slight change would make it perfect.

RealFaction (I'm on that account, i can't review on that one though why i have this one)

Bunnymajs responds:

Yeah well.. its a cover, didnt feel like changing anything more than the beat and tempo :)
But thanks anyway for the cc!

[PowerShowOff]

Nice drums but...

A bit odd for drum and bass, I really like the drums you used, but the strings sound a little cheesy (violiln stringish sounds after the first synth comes in). The bass isn't bad but somethings missing. Overall not bad but could use a tweak or two.

RealFaction (I'm on that account, i can't review on that one though why i have this one)

blackzilver responds:

Yes i have a diffrint take on DnB. I dont want to sound like every other DnB artist. So i try alot of wierd and diffrint stuff.

[-YRX- Shimasen N Bass]

Not bad

That beggining riff is nice but gets annoying. The bassline is nice coming in but feels like it could strike harder. I like the drums, and as the string varies in melody it gets better. I don't like the high string synth but maybe thats just me. I feel like this could be improved but it's not bad for what it is.

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YouriX responds:

Yes i have to agree with you with the bass. The album version will be improved. Ofcourse i wont blast the volume on the bass. But make it noticible.
Thank you for the review ;)

[Guitar Vs. Piano [ver. XCEED] (Goukisan Remix)]

WAY BETTER

Way better than the original, he used a crappy slayer guitar. This is top notch quality and I could see this used as RPG battle music, this is amazing :)

rtnario responds:

But hey, if he DIDN'T make the original with the "crappy slayer guitar" then this wouldn't exist. Keep that in mind =) Thanks for the review!

[Tzu - Tee Bee]

Good for a start...

I really like the eerie feel to it, but the snare that comes in at 0:41 isn't powerful enough. I also like the bass, but this needs more. I mianly say replace the drums. You did a good job with the bass, but some parts sound too high, and in my opinion deserves a dark low bass. I really dig the intro and the bass but this needs a little work. Nice job though for a first attempt =]

Tzunami responds:

Of course. I really just wanted to get the feel of it really. I made myself a nice setup for a wobble so I can just tweak knobs until I get the sound I want, sadly I can't get my bass deep enough from the settings I have so I'm going to experiment with it and hope for the best. The snare on the other hand I had turned on since it seamed to stand out too much, but I guess I was wrong there eh?

Thanks for reviewing.

[Tzu - Symphony of Hope]

=/....

Well not your best. The drums in the beginning are weak and the synth sounds more video game ish. Now if you fill in the backround with more bass and backround elements this could be really good. I do like your other stuff, but this didn't do it for me, sorry =[.

Tzunami responds:

I can agree with you that it really isn't that full, I wasn't focusing too much on the intro as it's like the "beginning" of me making music. I'm planning to put more into the end because there are a few things I need but since I'm balancing 4-5 songs at once I wanted to get the most finished out of the way.

I guess you could say it's a minimalistic complex song.

[{dj-N} Theory of Everything XL]

Some of the best electronic music on NG EVER

I have been on this site for years, and this is some of the best electronic music i've ever heard, sounds pro man. It takes alot to impress me. You should put this on Itunes and find a place to promote yourself outside of NG. I love this =]

dj-Nate responds:

Thanks, I'm definitely trying