RealityVictim's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Am I Kool Yet?!?!]

No this isnt hardstyle

This falls along the lines of industrial. I didn't like the guitar because it wasnt of good quality. Everything else was alright, but the strings at the end are beautiful. Not bad.

RealFaction

Gravey responds:

You are a moron. Feel free to realize that the entire genre thing was a joke played on a friend. Also feel free to notice I explained this to at least three people in past reviews.

-Gravey-

[Artifice and Inquisition]

Great example of sampling and scratching.

Although I dont like the drums much, or the backround synths, the way you arranged this with the samples and the way you scratch, it's good. Good job, but I feel it needs more energy.

-RealFaction

InvisibleObserver responds:

I'm pleased the scratching/tapestop effects came across well as I spent proportionately a large blk of my time on them.

[Good Morning {durn}]

Cool

It is New Wave but it feels like House too....well kinda. That eerie synth does throw the house feel off, but i love it! It feels like indie music too....this has a unique feel to it. Would go great in a flash movie. Now I'm hard to impress, but for what this is, as simple as it is, it makes you feel good =]. I like it, nice job.

durn responds:

Aye, whether it's due to my laziness or efficiency, I like keepin' things simple! :D Thanks for the listen, RealityVictim! :)

[-ganon95- Summer's here]

Hmm....

Ok I liked how it opened but after the cool sound effect, I didn't really like the bass, it just kinda got weird for me...this has potential to be better. I DID like the 8 bit sound that echoed like around 1:10. I think the bass should be replaced and that's a start. Nice start though.

-RealFaction

ganon95 responds:

hm..thanks for the review, but the bass is a bit unique for this song, so its gonna stay

[(KgZ) Rocket Man -Full-]

O-O!!!!

When I heard this, and you mentioned Megaman, I couldn't help but smile. This actually sounds more like an anime opening (which makes it very enjoyable ^_^) but I still think it could fit in a game like MegaMan. This is a great combination of 8-bit and techno....wow. Keep up the great work my friend, you have made a beast track =]. Mind checking out some of my stuff?

-RealFaction

KgZ responds:

Haha now that you mention I can definitely see the anime in it. Thank you for listening, I will definitely check out your stuff =)

[The First Time... - Japillow]

O_o....

I....ok there's alot wrong with this. Before I go on, please note I'm not trying to insult, I'm simply putting in constructive crtitism. As much as this is techno, it doesn't really make justice of the genre, I'm sorry =[. I don't like the way it starts out with the piano and snare, that needs serious work. The programmed vocals just sound kidna cheesy imo, and the clap doesn't really seem to fit the way it sounds as the song progresses. Well it's like I always say, "no matter how good you think you are, there's ALWAYS room for improvement, then your songs get better". Just keep working hard and I'm sure you'll make a masterpiece.

-RealFaction

Japillow responds:

Ah, I could've sworn I put this one in as miscellaneous...I know that the vocals kind of sound rather...dumb, and I also know there's always room for improvement. I thought the clap fit in...but that's just me. And I usually throw some piano into my songs because that's what got me started making music. Anyway, thank you for your honest review!

[J.D. - In My Head [AMP Remix]]

One important thing missing....

BASS!!! I mean you have a great piece here, but the bass synth needs to be upped, that's a key factor to a piece like this, it would be more catchy, but this is good as it is, but up the bass, and it would be a masterpiece. People might think this is useless review but I'm a musician who has 10 years of experience. But like i said, great piece you got here =)

AMP responds:

I think i should of turned down the sidechained synth instead, because it was overpowering the bass.

I'll keep that in mind for my next track, thanks for the review :)

[Summer Ocean (EP2 cut)]

D00D

I could seriously hear this on the techno radio stations! Nice work. You've always been one of my favorites here on NG. It's RealFaction btw, kinda miss talkin to ya. I really wish i could make at least one song like this.

The "Real" Music Critic,
RF

Kr1z responds:

oh Thanks :D ^^

[HW - Sedative Shapes]

Nice

Sounds like soft house i think more than hip hop, but i can see someone rapping to this. I like it though. I'm not sure how i would suggest to make this better, really it's not top notch hip hop, but still really good. Just doesn't have the entire feel to it, but i still like it. It's nice and relaxing.

The "Real" Music Critic,
RF

haywirehaywire responds:

aight thanks for the review.

[Evil-Dog - Outbreak]

Good but not ambient.

It IS ambient in the beginning, but this fits into the metal genre. But once again you have made another masterpiece, and it's epic man! I can't say it's quite quality enough for a movie, but really close. Good job.

Keepin it real,
RF

Evil-Dog responds:

metal? I don't think so.
And maybe a crappy movie? haha
thanks for the comment