Better instrumental.
Ok, REAL review, the vocals are ok but need to be a tad better, some of it sounds like he's constipated, idk how else to describe it. But kickass instruments, but not bad singing, but not good enough. Work on vocals, and this could seriously be a hit.
REAL Review
I don't mean to come off as a douchebag, but you've got a long way to go before you can call this song awesome in the least bit. The beat is kinda catchy but the quality is important....I haven't seen that shine here.
Everything in this song sounds like a cheap instrument. If you were to make a remix, there would be alot to do. I really don't know what to say to help except redo everything, sorry. With time and effort you'll eventually find better instruments to use if you love to make music to an extent.
-RF
One important thing missing....
BASS!!! I mean you have a great piece here, but the bass synth needs to be upped, that's a key factor to a piece like this, it would be more catchy, but this is good as it is, but up the bass, and it would be a masterpiece. People might think this is useless review but I'm a musician who has 10 years of experience. But like i said, great piece you got here =)
I think i should of turned down the sidechained synth instead, because it was overpowering the bass.
I'll keep that in mind for my next track, thanks for the review :)
D00D
I could seriously hear this on the techno radio stations! Nice work. You've always been one of my favorites here on NG. It's RealFaction btw, kinda miss talkin to ya. I really wish i could make at least one song like this.
The "Real" Music Critic,
RF
oh Thanks :D ^^
Nice
Sounds like soft house i think more than hip hop, but i can see someone rapping to this. I like it though. I'm not sure how i would suggest to make this better, really it's not top notch hip hop, but still really good. Just doesn't have the entire feel to it, but i still like it. It's nice and relaxing.
The "Real" Music Critic,
RF
aight thanks for the review.
FINALLY!!!
It's about time some hardstyle got on the front page =D! Although most hardstyle is nothing but bass and repetition which is very stupid, this has a feel to it's own. Now i cant say i could hear this at a club, but really close. Something just seems missing but this IS really good. I love the synths, but the bass needs work. It's not so hardstyle when it gets around 2:20 so this is a mix of different things not just hardstyle, but in a way that's good. Sounds like some retro video game stuff, which i happen to like. This is really cool but maybe needs a slight pump up but really it's also good in it's own. lol i know sounds weird but keep up the good work.
The "Real" Music Critic,
RF
Not bad
Pretty good for an intro, but i think you could build on this, because it feels like it should build up to a hard hitting beat and more synths. Otherwise, nice song, and good to start with.
Keepin it real,
RF
hmm....
honestly this has too much of a "happy" feel to be industrial, it needs more dark elements, and heavier drums. Like maybe a dark base. If you want a godo example of industrial, then look up "The Birthday Massacre", im sure you'll get some ideas, but not bad. Keep tryin this is something to build on.
Keepin it real,
RF
Good but not ambient.
It IS ambient in the beginning, but this fits into the metal genre. But once again you have made another masterpiece, and it's epic man! I can't say it's quite quality enough for a movie, but really close. Good job.
Keepin it real,
RF
metal? I don't think so.
And maybe a crappy movie? haha
thanks for the comment
Im hard to impress...
This ain't bad but some parts sound off-ish......and it's missing something. I think the synths need to be louder personally. It doesn't set much of an atmosphere after the beginning of the song. I personally think this is alright but it needs work.
Keepin it real,
RF
Explain "off-ish" please. :D
The synths could be a tad louder, I suppose, but it would take away from the kick/bass.
I didn't want ANY atmosphere in the beginning of the song, so I didn't add ANY.
It's meant to sound like that, read the description. xD
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